Today you are going to use your plan from yesterday to write your own version of the story.

It should be at least 1 and a half pages long and include many of the elements of the Year 4 writing checklist (see below).

I am particularly hoping that you use:

description of the setting using you senses

speech marks and speech punctuation

paragraphs (and interesting ways to open your paragraphs)

repeated references to your secret to 'tease' the reader