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St Mary’s Roman Catholic Primary School

Wisdom & Faith

English lesson


Today you are going to use your plan from yesterday to write your own version of the story.


It should be at least 1 and a half pages long and include many of the elements of the Year 4 writing checklist (see below).


I am particularly hoping that you use:

description of the setting using you senses

speech marks and speech punctuation

paragraphs (and interesting ways to open your paragraphs)

repeated references to your secret to 'tease' the reader

Important information about Thursday's live lesson