Today you are going to use your plan from yesterday to write your own version of the story.
It should be at least 1 and a half pages long and include many of the elements of the Year 4 writing checklist (see below).
I am particularly hoping that you use:
description of the setting using you senses
speech marks and speech punctuation
paragraphs (and interesting ways to open your paragraphs)
repeated references to your secret to 'tease' the reader